Revising Our Essay

 Today we revised the paragraphs we wrote yesterday by making changes and improving the writing of it. We also learned about formal vs informal writing. I felt good about today's class because I understood and showed through my paragraphs how to revise an essay. This week is flying by. Pretty soon we will already be a quarter into the year.

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